Prewriting Blog #1

Prompt #1

What I find most interesting about the prompt is the fact that this problem is very prevalent in today's world. I am very passionate about the lackluster state of the education system in America and finding ways to improve it. I plan to utilize Freire to show the negative methods of teaching and his ways to fix it and Jacoby to show the long-term effects of poor education and the detrimental effects of a damaged teaching system.

The primary outcome of this essay is to assess and evaluate the problem at hand and to provide convincing solutions to aid in changing the future for the better.

Something I need to consider about my audience is that the majority of them have experienced the Banking System and not everyone will find it troubling, some people think the education system does not need to be changed, and to take into consideration that my experience has been much difference than others who did not experience private education with more focus on Freire’s alternatives.